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【Six填词】Maedhros: All That's in My Head

声明:

这篇是我看了流月·绮老师(不敢冒昧艾特)的Six改写之后,冲去B站看了原剧,两股上头一起作用的结果:也是原剧歌曲改词。

也就是说,我厚着脸皮捡起了前人的神级创意,恬不知耻地接着玩。然后只憋出了这一首歌。

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原曲:All You Wanna Do

网易云上有Studio Cast和Original Broadway Cast两版(Yaaay~)。

我替换了大部分词,基本上做到了音节的对应,所以理论上可以唱出来,不过有些词需要吞音。

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每次唱完The only thing that matters to me—,请想象大梅亲吻他的纹章戒指。

(我考虑过好几种,其中我很想采用的是拔剑:歌词用The only thing that's in my head is,之后用金属的铿锵声代替亲吻。但是第一次出现时和上下文不符,所以还是放弃了。)

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嗯。暂时唠叨到这里。提前请大家原谅。

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ALL THAT'S IN MY HEAD

 

All that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

 

I think we can all agree

I'm a gorgeous tragedy


All that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens


And ever since I was a kid

I'd learnt how to commit

 

All that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

 

Commit to my dear father, Fëanaro

Who just craves some love so I made sure to show

The only thing that matters to me—

 

Bold, fierce Fëanaro

Taught me all about devotion

We are family

So our commitment should know no boundary

I obeyed him no matter what

Like some things had not broken my heart

I swore his oath for his shiny rocks

Killed for ships just to burn them at the shore

 

I know what you need

Everything I do willingly

'Cause you have my loyalty

I stand by you 'cause you love me

 

And maybe it is right

For my father's sake I have to fight

We share a family tie

And he has been my guiding light

Then all that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

Is killing, taking, no use resisting

All that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

Is murder, conquer, take back our honour

 

Pat my head and hold my hand

Tell me to finish what you can't end

Get over it

The only thing that matters to me—

 

But then there was my half-uncle,

Nolofinwë

Serious, stern and smart

Started a siege and made war an art

In ev'ry matter he excelled

The wise and worthy warlord of the Noldor in exile

 

Gave my kingship to him, 'tis the proper thing to do

I owe his line so much it's not that hard to choose, sent

My whole cohort of brothers all away from court

So they won't start a riot when they get too bored

 

I know what you need

All these things I do willingly

'Cause you have my loyalty

I stand by you 'cause you need me

 

And I know this is right

He will never once lead us astray

He's such an upright guy

And he will be our guiding light

Though all that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

Is killing, taking, no use resisting

All that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

Is murder, conquer, take back our honour

 

For centuries I guard the north

Till sudden flame burns red the world

Get over it

The only thing that matters to me—

 

Yeah we lost that battle

So I tried to get our people united

and you'll never guess how hard that is

 

Tried, hurt and dispersed

Divided into lots of factions

Led by quarreling lords

Although the worst of the worst is my brotherly horde

 

Coups in the court of our cousins

Then had a foreign princess kidnapped to boot

Gave me headaches a lot and I swear it's true

That without me I don't know what they'd do

 

I know what you need

Likewise you know what I seek

We share an enemy

What say you then will you stand with me

 

But I know why they did all those

The same urge stirs within my soul

Still we have this foe to fight

Before we can reclaim the light

 

True, all that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

Is killing, taking, no use resisting

All that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

Is murder, conquer, take back our honour

 

Oh how I want to remain true, but I

was being torn in two

Get over it

The only thing that matters to me—

I wasn't in a good place

Yeah…

 

With my brothers it isn't easy

Their temper's short and the Oath gets nasty

Thank gods I've got Finno there

He's always so sweet and so sincere

 

The ruling life isn't what he planned

so I am prepared to lend a helping hand

He, too, makes sure that I'm okay

When it's all too much, he would light my way

 

Now this finally

Is what I want, the love I need

Not one-way loyalty

I stand by him as he by me

 

And there's nothing more to it

We both care so much we're devoted

And then he fell and left me here

I thought he was my guiding light

Why did I think I deserved his light

My life's too dark to keep any light

'Cause all that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

Is killing—do it, no use resisting

All that's in my head

All that's in my head, Heavens

Is murder—don't think, where is my honour

  

Tear my soul and burn my hand

at least tell me everything is near an end

Get over it

Get over it

Get over it

The only thing

The only thing

The only thing that matters to me—

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改写后的词里,所有人都有些OOC(或者说,为了方便我填词,个性被过于简化了)。我本来是想关注大梅的loyalty(从词里也能看出来),他从忠心于父亲变成忠心于宝钻,中间也出于各种考虑把自己的忠心给过芬熊和联盟,但是最后还是整个精都被宝钻烧没了()。但是写出来的效果好像不太对……

原曲是用超轻松的调子唱超沉重的事情,我这里似乎轻松也没轻松起来,沉重也不够沉重。

总之,感谢所有看完的人。

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