【Six填词】Maedhros: All That's in My Head
声明:
这篇是我看了流月·绮老师(不敢冒昧艾特)的Six改写之后,冲去B站看了原剧,两股上头一起作用的结果:也是原剧歌曲改词。
也就是说,我厚着脸皮捡起了前人的神级创意,恬不知耻地接着玩。然后只憋出了这一首歌。
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原曲:All You Wanna Do
网易云上有Studio Cast和Original Broadway Cast两版(Yaaay~)。
我替换了大部分词,基本上做到了音节的对应,所以理论上可以唱出来,不过有些词需要吞音。
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每次唱完The only thing that matters to me—,请想象大梅亲吻他的纹章戒指。
(我考虑过好几种,其中我很想采用的是拔剑:歌词用The only thing that's in my head is,之后用金属的铿锵声代替亲吻。但是第一次出现时和上下文不符,所以还是放弃了。)
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嗯。暂时唠叨到这里。提前请大家原谅。
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ALL THAT'S IN MY HEAD
All that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
I think we can all agree
I'm a gorgeous tragedy
All that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
And ever since I was a kid
I'd learnt how to commit
All that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
Commit to my dear father, Fëanaro
Who just craves some love so I made sure to show
The only thing that matters to me—
Bold, fierce Fëanaro
Taught me all about devotion
We are family
So our commitment should know no boundary
I obeyed him no matter what
Like some things had not broken my heart
I swore his oath for his shiny rocks
Killed for ships just to burn them at the shore
I know what you need
Everything I do willingly
'Cause you have my loyalty
I stand by you 'cause you love me
And maybe it is right
For my father's sake I have to fight
We share a family tie
And he has been my guiding light
Then all that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
Is killing, taking, no use resisting
All that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
Is murder, conquer, take back our honour
Pat my head and hold my hand
Tell me to finish what you can't end
Get over it
The only thing that matters to me—
But then there was my half-uncle,
Nolofinwë
Serious, stern and smart
Started a siege and made war an art
In ev'ry matter he excelled
The wise and worthy warlord of the Noldor in exile
Gave my kingship to him, 'tis the proper thing to do
I owe his line so much it's not that hard to choose, sent
My whole cohort of brothers all away from court
So they won't start a riot when they get too bored
I know what you need
All these things I do willingly
'Cause you have my loyalty
I stand by you 'cause you need me
And I know this is right
He will never once lead us astray
He's such an upright guy
And he will be our guiding light
Though all that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
Is killing, taking, no use resisting
All that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
Is murder, conquer, take back our honour
For centuries I guard the north
Till sudden flame burns red the world
Get over it
The only thing that matters to me—
Yeah we lost that battle
So I tried to get our people united
and you'll never guess how hard that is
Tried, hurt and dispersed
Divided into lots of factions
Led by quarreling lords
Although the worst of the worst is my brotherly horde
Coups in the court of our cousins
Then had a foreign princess kidnapped to boot
Gave me headaches a lot and I swear it's true
That without me I don't know what they'd do
I know what you need
Likewise you know what I seek
We share an enemy
What say you then will you stand with me
But I know why they did all those
The same urge stirs within my soul
Still we have this foe to fight
Before we can reclaim the light
True, all that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
Is killing, taking, no use resisting
All that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
Is murder, conquer, take back our honour
Oh how I want to remain true, but I
was being torn in two
Get over it
The only thing that matters to me—
I wasn't in a good place
Yeah…
With my brothers it isn't easy
Their temper's short and the Oath gets nasty
Thank gods I've got Finno there
He's always so sweet and so sincere
The ruling life isn't what he planned
so I am prepared to lend a helping hand
He, too, makes sure that I'm okay
When it's all too much, he would light my way
Now this finally
Is what I want, the love I need
Not one-way loyalty
I stand by him as he by me
And there's nothing more to it
We both care so much we're devoted
And then he fell and left me here
I thought he was my guiding light
Why did I think I deserved his light
My life's too dark to keep any light
'Cause all that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
Is killing—do it, no use resisting
All that's in my head
All that's in my head, Heavens
Is murder—don't think, where is my honour
Tear my soul and burn my hand
at least tell me everything is near an end
Get over it
Get over it
Get over it
The only thing
The only thing
The only thing that matters to me—
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改写后的词里,所有人都有些OOC(或者说,为了方便我填词,个性被过于简化了)。我本来是想关注大梅的loyalty(从词里也能看出来),他从忠心于父亲变成忠心于宝钻,中间也出于各种考虑把自己的忠心给过芬熊和联盟,但是最后还是整个精都被宝钻烧没了()。但是写出来的效果好像不太对……
原曲是用超轻松的调子唱超沉重的事情,我这里似乎轻松也没轻松起来,沉重也不够沉重。
总之,感谢所有看完的人。
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- 时间2022-06-29